Saturday, March 3, 2018

Thanks Lisa, 7:27 P.M.




Each daffodil echoes the
Universe in explosion.
We're all dust from
The same flower. 

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    1. Good thing too. I'm a pretty simple mechanism.

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  2. Daffodils are so cheerful, and often look as though they are having a good sing. Love how nature echoes x

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  3. An extraordinary analogy and a cosmic truth, all wrapped up in four little lines. Thank you for the lovely poem, Geo.

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    1. Most kind. Thanks should go to Lisa too --who gets me thinking like that.

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  4. Very beautiful, almost allegorical poetry!

    Thank you!

    PipeTobacco

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    1. My pleasure, Prof. And best of luck on your Lenten resolve.

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  5. A wonderful piece. Gentle and profound. Lovely!

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    1. Thank you Tom. It is a distillate of time spent among gardens and Sufis. We're here to learn.

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  6. That's a great way to put it. We are a tiny speck in the universe.

    Lovely daffodils.

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